Sunday, April 23, 2006

A gift.

Page 31. The beginning of Chapter 2!

I'm going to try giving each page a title for a while. Let me know if it adds anything to the experience.


TomCarroll said...

Okay ... I'm reading every day now (instead of weekly (or sporadically)) ... and commenting, too.

This stuff is good, though I think the Imperial Guard ships are really dumb ... falling for that old transponder trick. Taking a little breather in the action to allow for character development is very good. I'll be commenting regularly so there won't be any shortage of MY opinions around the place ...

rickart said...

Excellent! Please do read daily and comment often!

Yeah, I agree it was a cheap way to get rid of the persuit, but I felt it was time to move on. No moss gathering on THIS rock!